tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6519413860885906550.post2765245092716267018..comments2024-03-15T00:19:45.043-07:00Comments on JDP News: Sweet Saturday SamplesJoyce DiPastenahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16638031103659265422noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6519413860885906550.post-28439697886148491742011-10-01T22:35:31.947-07:002011-10-01T22:35:31.947-07:00Wonderful job setting up the scene, and then final...Wonderful job setting up the scene, and then finally the flash of the knife. Very well done! :)<br /><br />Here's my sample: http://diannehartsocksalex.wordpress.com/sweet-saturday-samples-3/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6519413860885906550.post-53325227383731296302011-10-01T13:59:24.487-07:002011-10-01T13:59:24.487-07:00Eeek! What a place to leave off! Wonderful tension...Eeek! What a place to leave off! Wonderful tension building here.Jessica Knausshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07049731983377756203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6519413860885906550.post-80208397899985849912011-10-01T13:16:24.951-07:002011-10-01T13:16:24.951-07:00Good cliffhanger.
Elaine CantrellGood cliffhanger.<br /><br />Elaine CantrellAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6519413860885906550.post-8328320521401143542011-10-01T12:41:10.446-07:002011-10-01T12:41:10.446-07:00Thanks, everyone, for stopping by! Yes, there will...Thanks, everyone, for stopping by! Yes, there will be more next week. :-)Joyce DiPastenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16638031103659265422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6519413860885906550.post-29058714619413487492011-10-01T12:24:56.214-07:002011-10-01T12:24:56.214-07:00Wow, great tension! Will there be more next week?Wow, great tension! Will there be more next week?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6519413860885906550.post-88574840318897018292011-10-01T11:14:03.833-07:002011-10-01T11:14:03.833-07:00Great building of tension in this scene. I can fee...Great building of tension in this scene. I can feel Helene's ambivalence and can understand her reasons for hesitating.Sandy Nachlingerhttp://iousex.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6519413860885906550.post-80733684085731879842011-10-01T11:02:38.903-07:002011-10-01T11:02:38.903-07:00Great way t finish, I hope you give us more next w...Great way t finish, I hope you give us more next week. I'm intrigued.Sherry Gloaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03143365764333974956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6519413860885906550.post-47102277727799612202011-10-01T10:58:47.750-07:002011-10-01T10:58:47.750-07:00I'm so excited about this book, it sounds so g...I'm so excited about this book, it sounds so good. Can't wait to read it. :)Mary Kirklandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04991095291522043588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6519413860885906550.post-59001136304777249052011-10-01T05:54:57.461-07:002011-10-01T05:54:57.461-07:00Ooh, intriguing sample! Must read more to find ou...Ooh, intriguing sample! Must read more to find out what happens next.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com